Rough Cut 2

This is the first rough cut i've done after I got all of my filming done. I finished editing all the footage together in about 2 hours and this is the very first piece of rough cut I have. I need to do a lot with sound, for instance add a soundtrack, delete the sound completely off of some clips and add in some non diegetic sound for others. There are also some shorts which looks slightly too dark or slightly too light compared to the shots next to it so i'm going to add some effects to play around with the lighting on these ones. I'm also not sure about having the title come in so quickly. Originally I was going to have the title come in after the blackout but before I had the scene with the gunshot I put the title in when the bus goes past the screen. I however might change this to my original plan as I think it may look better and look less like a trailer. I will do this over the next few days hopefully and upload a second rough cut with these improvements made. I will then fine tune the piece until it's how I want it.